You Are Gone Forever Comments

I love it how you are speaking to the missing one and telling him how you have explained to the young child that he will not be around close at hand anymore, but instead will be watching over him from a star. Very profound and well chosen words.

Like I said before.I love poems that have questions, This is a good one, good write

Why did you do this to Aryan and to me.... it is baffling quaestion... no answer as it is God's gift and was takenback... bautiful i write... i just composed few seconds back.. why feet are trumbling? comeback home and never say good bye

This is a very sad and touching work, Sandra. The rhyming is very gentle.

There is a say - 'Have constructive thoughts, consoling words, compassionate acts.” You deserve full points on this poem for all those in above. Your words sprinkle the ray of light in the dark hour of sorrow. Good write. Good heart. Thank you.

its amazing how the human being wins in searching a ray of light in the dark void, the empty space... i suppose such empathetic writing sparks that fire... sandra, u r amazing!

Seen this scenario before, very sad and heart warming. Bless you all

You show such empathy Sandra. I really admire how you tune in to the pain of another soul, and pick up what I consider to be the total sense of loss and the anger stage of grief. 10/10 for your sensitivity and caring.... Karin Anderson

Beautiful and riveting tribute...

Good write Well express

You have achieved wonderful rapport with your colleague's sorrow. This poem must be a solace to her. A very poignant expression of grief. Your last lines are especially beautiful. Kind regards, Sandra

a had reads this poem earlier..only dint know what comment to make..in such an uncertain life we make so many plans..i dont know if death is a sad end...but untimely ones leave us in a state of helpless ness