Thursday, November 20, 2014

You Are Not Changed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every thing is changed
values of life is also changed
sun and moon are faded
twinkling stars are beguiled
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ramesh rai
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Amitava Sur 30 November 2014

A revelation of nature's beauty, so pure and unadulterated. It emanates it's beauty within so many changes otherwise.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2014

A beautiful description of nature's steadiness. It's our mood that brings apparent changes in nature. A nice poem.

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Neela Nath Das 23 November 2014

your smile is as sweet as honey is your wrath is as hot as fire is. - - - - - - -loved these lines.The compare and contrast style is nice.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

Again nature or God is still the same- your smile is as sweet as honey is your wrath is as hot as fire is. beatiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2014

elevation of celestial order is changed fundamental law of nature is also changed but you are not changed.- -very nicely envisioned. Celestial is sublime. Many thanks.

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Neela Nath Das 21 November 2014

A beautiful poem indeed.It reminds me of Shakespeare's sonnet- - - -Shall I compare thee.10 of course.

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2014

''fundamental law of nature is also changed but you are not changed.''-beautiful poem

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Salini Nair 21 November 2014

sun and moon are faded twinkling stars are beguiled seasons are changed so many times dawn and dusk are also elapsed elevation of celestial order is changed......................everything had changed...nice work

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