Tuesday, November 11, 2014

You Are On Your Own.. Comments

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I can't hold your hands,
To take you various lands,
To show what places are suitable,
when You are on your own,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 13 November 2014

a good poem written with an authority

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Antonio Liao 12 November 2014

viewed the mother's heart, as the infinite love of Her child...so touching and alluring to give of what is Love of a Mother...a star and a 10/10

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Paul Sebastian 12 November 2014

A wonderful poem on the choices we make...when we are on our own. I particularly like the punch in the last stanza. Be careful when you decide something big and trivial, A moment of confusion may take a long time to be cleared, A beautiful poem. Thank you. Paul

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