You Are The Ultimate Proof Poem by Bassam Hussain

You Are The Ultimate Proof

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When I saw you on that eve
Your beauty increased my believe
My eyes have never seen
A sight such as green

You are our creator's masterpiece
My mind rests and the doubt cease
All can't be by none
When a painting needs one

Your beauty must be a god's act
Replace the theories with a definite fact
A theory is always on the fence
Until it's met with such evidence

You are the ultimate proof
The mighty is above the high roof
If God his messages did not seal
Then You are the next reveal

Your beauty is the miracle of this time
Can't be pictured by a mere rhyme
If all of humanity would want to believe
They should have seen you on that eve

Wednesday, February 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,miracle,romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My dear, you are the ultimate proof.In Art you are a painting that needs an Artist, in science you are the evidence that makes a theory a definite fact, in religion you are a revelation that shows the truth. I'll never look upon the likes of you again
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 19 February 2020

You are the ultimate proof The mighty is above the high roof If God his messages did not seal Then You are the next reveal......./// romantically written through the mystical sense; love this piece

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Bassam Hussain 20 February 2020

I am honored Thank you for commenting

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 February 2020

Such a nice start, Bassam. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Bassam Hussain 06 February 2020

Will do, and thank you for commenting

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2020

Well conceived and nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Bassam.

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Bassam Hussain 06 February 2020

You are welcome, and thank you for commenting

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Bassam Hussain

Bassam Hussain

Arar, Saudi Arabia
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