You Complete Me Poem by iamjc lunaria

You Complete Me

Rating: 4.0


forever starts the time i met you
it is you who made me whole
im having a new path
thank you for accompanying me with out a doubt

living my life before is nothing
then you came and shade it with eternal happiness
now im on my peak of evolving
with your help i found a contentment

forever is a word of a lifetime
im overjoyed because i have it with you
i thank you for letting me through
to your life and make me a part of your entire self!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Berndtsson 20 June 2010

Thank you for a pleasant read. You can feel the weight of your feelings, but also the romantic magic within them.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 June 2010

emotions and words are penned carefully in the poem I think... so that's nice... keep it up Filipino poet!

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Paul Judges 21 June 2010

Very nice poem

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The two becoming one, having one heart! They say this is a great mystery! Lovely poem! ; D

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Joseph Poewhit 20 June 2010

Two souls binding in harmony of life

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emotoin filled lines...smooth and pleasant flow...good work

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