You Fall From Heaven Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You Fall From Heaven

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You fall from heaven I wait for you,
You are drops of diamond also new.
Morning dew speaks and does adore,
Surely now this sky has opened door.

Bore I do not feel I love to wet sure,
I know oh drops of rain you are pure.
Calmly I do sit in the branch of a tree,
To watch you I wait also I fly in free.

With colour I am feathered by father,
He gives me strength I do not bother.
Nature is my mother she gives food,
Always I sing and fly with nice mood.

Green leaves make bed for me to sleep,
Branch to branch in happiness I leap.
Chirping of God's wisdom ever I do,
I do take rest and sing more I feel too.

Amazing is my voice that attracts men,
I talk to them I learn and do teach then.
Wonder you are rain drops shine in ray,
Come on, come on to Earth we shall pray.

Friday, July 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the poem
Here poet describes about rain drops through a bird. The bird says, ” You rain drops like a diamond drop come, I am waiting for you. Now the sky has opened its door. It is morning. Morning dew is also waiting for you. I don’t feel bore. God father has given me strength and lovely body. Nature mother gives me food, Green leaves make me bed for sleep. I always sing and fly in nice mood. My voice attracts men. I learn from them and teach them too. Rain drops! You please come soon. We shall play together and pray to God together.”This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 17 July 2015

The blessings of God favors every living creature, birds! Branch to branch in happiness I leap. Let every thing that hath breath praise the Lord. A lovely piece of work, Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani!

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Rain falls from heaven. God’s grace also falls from heaven. Lovely words motivate mind always. This is a nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2016

picture of Angel mia LOVE xTruly beautiful ink wow amazingly Devine tfs xoxoxo 16 Jul 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful indeed....thanks for sharing sir.. 16 Jul 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xBeautiful and serene! Thank you for share such a pleasure to read! 17 Jul 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xI admire your words, your end rhymes, the cute picture of your choice, altogether one greatest abundant feast inDivine Poetry. I have enjoyed this Beauty a very lot and thank you for sharuing this Beauty of Divine Joy. 17 Jul 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Joseph Anderson xA birds eye view of natures treasures.A touching, endearingly written poem. Great rhyme, flow and cadence andvery memorable and enjoyable 18 Jul 2015 by Joseph Anderson | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is fascinatingly vivid. Thank you for sharing. 18 Jul 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of Green Iguana xInteresting poem from a bird's perspective. 19 Jul 2015 by Green Iguana | Reply picture of rain... xA song to celebrate life and the mighty creator behind it. Beautifully expressed and with a purpose to lift the spirit to soaring heights. 20 Jul 2015 by rain... | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 July 2015

He gives me strength and, i am still alive. Nice work.

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Valsa George 18 July 2015

A beautiful poem! The cheerful perspective of a bird is effectively described as it watches the drops of rain falling from the sky! (10)

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 July 2015

Beautiful flow of words.Loved reading the poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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