Monday, December 3, 2012

You Have No Shortfalls! Comments

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You are as perfect as the sun, to wake up every day,
And To rest every night in the quietness of dark rays,
You have no shortfalls to concern, but you have treasure,
That is stored safely in each and every cell of the divine shelter,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Excellent portrait of attributed traits.. But I wish it could have been a little longer..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 04 December 2012

the first two lines with the sun as simile is fantastic

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Vishal Sharma 03 December 2012

nice poem indeed....really enjoyed this one..

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