You Make Me Who I Am Poem by Marieta Maglas
You Make Me Who I Am
When You come here
As a great Light,
A gently glowing Light,
Every time it rains,
Your words unshackle my soul.
You make me understand who I am.
You make me love You.
You release me.
You let me be myself.
And every time I look at You,
I have tears in my eyes.
And every time I look at You,
I see my rainbow.
Between the kingfisher's scream
And the sea waves sound,
The feelings are my abandoned ships.
Come and see Your child's face,
When this child hears Your name.
I am this child.
Your Light
Touches
My eyelids,
My thoughts,
And my ships.
Between this sunrise
And the next sunset,
Red is the same reality,
And my fagged eyelids
I cannot change it.
I lay out of sight.
I can see the pain and the flight.....
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Between the kingfisher's large scream and the sea, the feelings become failed ships. Light comes bearing your name. It reach my eyelids, It reach my thoughts, It reach my ships. Between this sunrise and the next sunset, red is the same reality, and my fagged eyelids cannot change it. rarely one chance upon work of such supereme brilliance.... I really do wish it was mine :)
‘…Every time it rains, /Your words unshackle my soul to freedom…’ Very much Romantic…rhapsodic…and glittering metaphor shrouding whole Soul 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Between this sunrise and the next sunset, red is the same reality, and my fagged eyelids cannot change it. 10
Light comes bearing your name. It reach my eyelids, It reach my thoughts, It reach my ships. sweet stanza, romantic way of written but still philosophical touch is found there...which means your passion of writing is cognitive way of look... impressive expression and menaingful thought... I relly loved this poem and read three time and enjoyed a lot..well done mari dear for this sweet and well written poem...10/10
one of best poems..that i read...Chiefly... You make me understand who I am, You release me to myself...... very good...Mari.. with curtsy Ramin .
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4/17/2024 11:41:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I loveeeeeeeeee it! ! !