Rohit Sharma

Rookie - 8 Points (July 6,1984 / Amritsar, India)

You N I And This Moment - Poem by Rohit Sharma

This is the moment, we wanted to live
You n I together; lots of love to give....

Moon is full; looks beautiful today
You n I, always waited for this day...
Night is blue at her shining best
Lets make love; keep everthing at rest....

This is the moment, we always waited for
Our first special night; time is like never before....

Come closer to me and hug me tight
Loving each other amidst dim light...
You don't know how stunning you look
Wanna make this moment; a shakespear book....

This is the moment we both used to dream
You n I together; no one around to be seen....

I love the way you shy away like this
When I come close to give you a kiss...
Look in my eyes; tell me what you can feel
No one sees you baby the way I see....

This is the moment we both will remember
Our first night together with our love to surrender...

Lets live this moment with our love so warm
God of love has blessed us with all his charm
Baby, hold my hand and come closer to me
Feeling eachother's breaths; setting our souls free! ! ! !


Comments about You N I And This Moment by Rohit Sharma

  • Unwritten Soul (7/23/2010 11:25:00 PM)


    Under the moonlight u both make an oath...this poem beautiful, the moonlight never bright as the love you both shared...Even it is only a poem but i think it has it own persona! keep writing friend...stars will read everything from yours (Report) Reply

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  • (7/2/2010 6:53:00 AM)


    nice lyric poem full of imagery and metaphors. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (6/28/2010 6:09:00 PM)


    it's romantic and imaginary, you could have put in some more romance to bring out the beauty. well done. (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2010 1:57:00 PM)


    This is the moment we both used to dream
    You n I together; no one around to be seen....

    this is what i dream.... :)
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  • (6/22/2010 3:31:00 AM)


    Hey again you have pove that you are great writter....... Again a beautiful poem........ (Report) Reply

  • Jc Lunaria (6/22/2010 3:26:00 AM)


    a great great poem...
    sharing love with the one you truly love... oh happiness is when you share your nights and day with your love..
    well done! ! great job.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 7, 2010



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