Tuesday, July 13, 2010

I See Myself...In Your Eyes! ! !

Rating: 3.1
In this fake world, with your love so true
And you always by my side, it feels so good..
False images everywhere, world full of lies
I see my true self in your enticing eyes....

You've always loved me the way I am
Wish to give you the same, Really wish I can
I feel so secure to have you there for me
Coz true love elsewhere, I can hardly see...

Love is the most amazing thing happened to me
You makes my love special and really it is...
Used to search myself in the mirror and skies
Until I saw myself, In your scintillating eyes....

Your eyes so true, gives perfect reflection of mine
Tells me whats wrong with me, what's bad and what's all fine...
They give me strength, when I see so much love and care
No mater what happens, know you will always be there....

I promise to come back to you at end of each day
You are special, My sweetheart in every way...
Baby, I am always yours, you'll remain mine
Coz, I see myself in your 2 beautiful eyes! ! !

Note: The Topic was suggested to me by my friend and poet Anita Trivedi and she asked me to write few lines on this. Hope notto dissapoint her.
Rohit Sharma
You have not disappointed my friend Rohit but have done great justice to the topic. Lovely lines!
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Sonali Sings 01 March 2011
A poem comes from with in, and in this feel it!
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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010
This poem is absolutely sensational! I love how you connect the ideas between them...well expressed feelings
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Indira Babbellapati 17 July 2010
a love poem with good n consistent flow...
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Lady Grace 15 July 2010
a sweet one..nicely written..
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Rinki Nandy 15 July 2010
B'ful poem on love..not disappointing to her or us...keep it up..
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The Lost.. 15 July 2010
this is wonderful Mr. Rohit i really liked it and i du think it wil disapoint her thanks for sharing :)
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Aastha Uppal 14 July 2010
accepting the person as he is, is something only some special people in our lifes can do.. and the true image of ourself as a human is only known to a person who understands us in and out.. even if they are our flaws.. seeing them with the eyes of our loved ones gives us an inspiration to amend them... thats the beauty of having such people who make us feel unique, blessed and special.... great write! ! !
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Pradeeta Mishra 14 July 2010
Your poem is true with its feelings. Someone who has not been in love can actually look through your eyes and understand what true love is. Smooth, the transitions from verse to verse is easy, keep up!
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Meetika Srivastava 14 July 2010
It's a smooth read, nice piece! liked the opening line 'In this fake world.....'
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