M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 177,642 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

You Surge In My Thoughts - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Despite my doubts, my hopes and fears
Despite my smiles, my stares and tears
I always remember you, you are so dear
Be it a night, be it day, be it months or Years

I scale the depth of your heart
So vast, so scattered
With the fins of my determination
My passion and faith keeps driving.

The relation, the bond and the affections
You surge in my thoughts
On the flying white horse
And to take me away.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about You Surge In My Thoughts by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/15/2018 9:55:00 AM)


    Amusing poem, Love is at the central place of life, Great one Asim. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/13/2018 4:21:00 AM)


    The relation, the bond and the affections
    You surge in my thoughts
    On the flying white horse
    And to take me away......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10
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  • The Poet Poet (10/11/2018 6:06:00 PM)


    You devote you total self in the belief that she will for ever relieve the stress in your mind and hope love does act as a balm for all times s it not an unrequited lvers chime (Report) Reply

  • Petals Azureblue (10/11/2018 10:19:00 AM)


    Despite doubts and fears when it's love it will live in your heart against all odds. This poem is so well moulded together. Every concept it touches gels in well with the whole. Enjoyed.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (10/11/2018 8:49:00 AM)


    Wow, this is what i call a true love. You are to good to write such poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 11, 2018



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