You Told Me No Poem by LongLive BrokenHeart

You Told Me No

Rating: 4.5


You told me no,
I said yes.
You said don't do it,
But I went ahead.
You tried to help me.
But you got in the way.
No need for me.
You tried to wrap me with your love,
But no use I was to cold.
You told me no, don't do it.
But I said 'what's the point of me here any ways? '
You said to 'brighten up my day.'
I said 'what light do you see? '
You said 'a light so deep, that only one person can see.'
I asked 'who is that one person that can see this light? '
You looked up, smile, walked over to me,
You wrapped me in your arms,
And whisper in my ear 'I can the light you hold, and it's beautiful.'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem because I went through a diffcult time in my life. My friend (Trent and Travis) told me no dont even think about it. They told I was a too amazing girl to leave them. They told i was beautiful, no matter who thought what
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 19 August 2013

A sweet poem. The one who can see the light you hold, is the one on whom you shine.

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Connor Whyte 06 November 2012

Very nice good motivation and beautiful meaning.

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