Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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You Will Not Rain

Rating: 4.9

I know you will not rain
As you find in it no gain
All our efforts are in vain
Problems follow like in chain

We deserve no mercy and pity
Villages ruined and rushing towards city
No more means and loosing entity
Life at standstill and no more continuity

Little more delay may invite wrath
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Radha Seth 29 September 2009

Little more delay may invite wrath Hunger all over and terrible deaths Man will kill man for simple bread

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Argum Sheth 22 September 2009

Air we have completely polluted Chemicals and poisons in water diluted No area we have left for natural intervention>>>>>>>>>>>>..10

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Yacov Mitchenko 18 September 2009

You seem to be suggesting here that the Lord sends no rain because He's not pleased with the way we're treating the planet. We're hardly cooperative either; our selfishness exacerbates the global crisis. Another thoughtful piece.

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Rafique Farooqi 12 September 2009

Man will kill man for simple bread You will be alive but lie will be dead What is free from you as gift? For sharing natural wealth we have rift No one is budging with little shift We need solution with meaningful lift very good message for man

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Hailey Agnew 05 September 2009

good poem, ,10++ please visit some of my poems :)

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Maria Shipka 07 February 2010

Maybe you will be surprised as I run from first page to the last one...reason is that I´d like to read them all... now...and at once...what is not possible :) ....but back to your poem...The topic of it is so much actual, so much serious, so much alarming. Looking back on our life time we remember...times when rivers was clear, full af fishes, snow was white, sky was blue, the air was clean without pollution...we had less of all, but enjoyed all more....What caused all this greedness, the will to own more and most...we lost a realy sense of life, we are going to destroy our mother Earth...we have to stop...we must improve the sins we caused! ! !

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i know Jeramie Astigz is typing a message. Jeramie Astigz: sorry 4 thinking bad to u but i felt really like that b4 i thought u txt him and say wat i am doing now

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Ken E Hall 04 November 2009

The world has been stripped... Chenoble, acid rain no -- gain Point well spelled out ++++regards

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Twinkle Vohra 03 October 2009

What is free from you as gift? For sharing natural wealth we have rift No one is budging with little shift

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Venkat Ramanna 01 October 2009

I know you will not rain As you find in it no gain All our efforts are in vain Problems follow like in chain

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