Young Hearts Poem by Camagu Somana

Young Hearts

Rating: 5.0


For love, never offer your hearts in abundance
As that may cause you to ride an ambulance
Because of heartaches and headaches
For dreams and promises require high stakes
And when all what is delight is done and dusted
Leaves an innocent heart hurt and frustrated
I say never put both feet on the inside
At the beginning as you might slide
I know how does it feel after that first passionate kiss
Sleepless nights and the heart still is at ease
Until the swift and soft spoken words turn into a game
After giving your all in this love that's insane
So many would say, love is lost
But I say for hopefuls love comes at a cost

Thursday, October 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo S Mbuyazi 08 November 2018

Well thought piece of writing...came from within and it's so believably touching.... 10 I vote

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Camagu Somana 09 November 2018

Thanks a lot Mr Mbuyazi...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2018

For love, never offer your hearts in abundance As that may cause you to ride an ambulance.......sparkling expression! A beautiful poem my friend.....10

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Camagu Somana 18 October 2018

Thanks a lot Dr Swain! ! !

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 October 2018

Love, with all its emotional devastation! But Love is also our salvation!

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Camagu Somana 18 October 2018

Love is life. Life is salvation. Thanks Mihaela! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 04 October 2018

love comes at a cost, beautiful

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Camagu Somana 04 October 2018

Thanks Gajanan. Yes indeed it comes at a cost...

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2018

Soft spoken words of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Camagu Somana 04 October 2018

Thanks Edward...

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Umtata, South Africa
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