Saturday, February 21, 2009

Your Face (C) 2-21-09 Comments

Rating: 4.3

Through the rain I stand in grace
Staring at your beautied face
My love runs through my heart so deep
Time with seeing you keeps me stressless
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Zahir Kijani
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James Mclain 20 March 2009

Forever in grace never to stand alone pigment fresh and wet...thank you..

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Albert Fernandez 22 February 2009

i love it i feel the vibes! great poem i give it a 10!

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Tyease Collins 22 February 2009

So short and sweet and to the point...beautiful poem Corey -Tyease

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Maya Reid 22 February 2009

An interesting rhyme scheme. Nice sentiment. Overall, I like it.

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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