You hurt me with your words
You hurt me with your silence
Your love cuts me deeper than any sword
Bound by blood
I slave for your conditional love
I shape my being to your image
Painfully cutting away
The parts of me,
That is not you
But me
But no matter how deep i cut
How hard i twist
How far i bend
How much i weep
You still see
Tiny little bits
Of me
Breaking the conditions
Of your love
Deep and emotional. It's like I can feel the intensity. It's great!
a magnificent poem... how many of us have tried to change ourselves for those whose love is conditional
'Bound by blood I slave for your conditional love I shape my being to your image Painfully cutting away The parts of me, That is not you But me' is a magnificent stanza in a wonderful poem
IT IS REALLY GOOD....I LIKE THIS......Y ou hurt me with your silence...THIS LINE IS MOST BEUTIFULL, YOU ARE VERY CORRECT SILENCE OF OF DEAREST ONE IS MORE PAINFUL THAN THAT OF ANYTHING
beautiful poem, , well penned and emotional...thanks for sharing..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's a good poem, , , I like it very much! ! ! Top marks! ! !