When the slow day,
awakening me,
from memories of you,
that haunt me,
In my day dreams,
I feel your presence,
in my shadows,
like your soul,
coming down,
from the clouds,
and sliding from my side,
like flavours of,
ripening fruits of love,
i feel the life, glowing,
before my eyes,
did it thrice... its beautiful and very well written....meaningful and done to perfection with added dimensions and levels... superb write cheers talking of love...one shd never forget callimachus When Love and Wine Inspire If sober, and inclin'd to sport, To you, my fair one, I resort; The still-forbidden bliss to prove, Accuse me then, and blame my love. But if to rashness I incline, Accuse me not, but blame the wine: When Love and Wine at once inspire, What mortal can control his fire. Of late I came, I know not how, Embrac'd my fair, and kiss'd her too; It might be wrong; I feel no shame, And, for the bliss, will bear the blame. Callimachus (c.310-240 B.C.)
soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....
soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....
soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....
so romantic and soul kissing poem with rich and meaningful idea with... very much melodic way of expression.. loved it
feel your presence, in my shadows, like your soul, coming down, from the clouds, ....................... heart ruffles by memorabilia shadow by reality yet haunts deep cloud deciphers gleams of love soul when sieves by the glory, most passionate by art of love as when curved over the rune of reminiscence, ingeniously wrought by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing
It seems you have collected sweet memories, a great thing, now these awesome memories are entertaining you is even greater and so is this write, a beautiful, soft write! 10 without any hesitation.
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It seems you have collected sweet memories, a great thing, now these awesome memories are entertaining you is even greater and so is this write, a beautiful, soft write!