Your Mood Of Late, O Rains Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Your Mood Of Late, O Rains

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You drain your all to quench parched hills,
Man manoeuvres others to fell,
Heaven's gifts for profit to sell,
You rain, a scorched wounded heart heals.
What use boons be to thankless man?
If boons paid back are best one can
Would not this planet be heaven?
Yet, to hell's creed he seems driven,
Aware, you doubtless sure would rain.
Your nature is to drain and drain,
For eons gracious you remain,
Whilst man is as has been— a pain.
Yet, judging from your mood of late,
What if you leave him to his fate?
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Monsoon musings | 03.09.16 |

Sunday, March 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: rains,weather
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Monsoons seem to have become erratic all over the globe. Seasons have problems to keep their due dates. Weathers are undergoing unknown change. Excesses are as common as shortfalls. Has Earth begun to lose patience with her ungrateful son?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 17 July 2019

'What use boons be to thankless man? '...yes...what use? a thought provoking question...meaningful and well thought out poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 July 2019

Thank you for reading this older poem of 2016. I appreciate your feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2019

If boons paid back are best one can Would not this planet be heaven? .......insightful presentation. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

But mankind is not in the mood to listen to, thank you Kumarmani ahakul.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 April 2019

Simply sublime sonnet, sir Aniruddha....10+++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Thank you Bernard Asuncion, but a cry in wilderness as it were.

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