Your Presence Felt Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Your Presence Felt

Rating: 2.8


In my eyes,
You cast light.
Not shadow.

In your mind this you must believe.
Success you have already achieved.

My heart you have touched.
In a way you have chosen.
In a way no one else knows.

Your place is there.
To lead not follow.

Never fear your achievements to be,
Second best.
You must not feel challenged by others.
Do what it is you do.
Not what you assume the rest expect.

In my eyes,
You cast light.
Not shadow.

In your mind this you must believe.
Success you have already achieved.
If you had not...
Your presence felt,
Would never bestow a glow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 15 August 2009

When I thought I was so closed(near) I realized after reading your poem, that I am still so far...Great inspiration...you give me.....Knowing for a fact that a long journey I have to accomplished...'IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS', Love and Peace, Romeo (You got my 10+)

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