* Your Whispers * Poem by ANJALI SINHA

* Your Whispers *

Rating: 3.1


Your whispers I heard
Even though in a crowd
From your sorrows of silence
Rose my song of love
I flew past you
Like zephyr so gentle
But you heard not my groans
Cos youre lost in your world

The crimson of the wines
From the goblets you have
To thee I swear
From the depths of my heart
There shall not be another
Another Majnu
Like how thou art

Anjali
17-01-2010

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gautam Sen 07 March 2010

I just took a chance to read any of your poems and it was my choice. I've gone for a right choice. This poem is too good to touch and penetrate a heart whom the expressions are meant. Last line is so nice.... I swear From the depths of my heart There shall not be another Another Majnu Like how thou art I enjoyed the poem. Gautam

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Siddharth Singh 03 March 2010

A vote of appreciation for one of a kind majnu. His whispers you heard from which rose the song of your love. Mission accomplished for you, dear majnu. Fascinating indeed Anju.

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Nikunj Sharma 29 January 2010

not a majnu like him and a laila like you the cup's full to the brim and the love seems true may god bless the laila and majnu....

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Christopher Murphy 27 January 2010

lovely...enjoyed it all...great stuff. chris

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Sanjib Das 22 January 2010

LIKE JOHN DONNE, YOU CREATE A HARMONY BETWEEN TWO HEARTS. AGAIN YOU SHOW YOUR UNIQUE QUALITY AND I GIVE YOU 10/10.

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Drashi Shah 13 December 2014

great awesome and very nice.......

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Drashi Shah 13 December 2014

nice.... awesome..... great

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Rahul Aithal 01 August 2010

Wonderful, Anjali. Keep writing. Rahul.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2010

lovely i enjoyéd it thank u invite u to send ur precious comments on my poems too

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 March 2010

'like zephyr so gentle' your words always touch me and it stays timeless... 10++++ clicked but it didnt appear becoz of techno problem.

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