Your whispers I heard
Even though in a crowd
From your sorrows of silence
Rose my song of love
I flew past you
Like zephyr so gentle
But you heard not my groans
Cos youre lost in your world
The crimson of the wines
From the goblets you have
To thee I swear
From the depths of my heart
There shall not be another
Another Majnu
Like how thou art
Anjali
17-01-2010
A vote of appreciation for one of a kind majnu. His whispers you heard from which rose the song of your love. Mission accomplished for you, dear majnu. Fascinating indeed Anju.
not a majnu like him and a laila like you the cup's full to the brim and the love seems true may god bless the laila and majnu....
LIKE JOHN DONNE, YOU CREATE A HARMONY BETWEEN TWO HEARTS. AGAIN YOU SHOW YOUR UNIQUE QUALITY AND I GIVE YOU 10/10.
lovely i enjoyéd it thank u invite u to send ur precious comments on my poems too
'like zephyr so gentle' your words always touch me and it stays timeless... 10++++ clicked but it didnt appear becoz of techno problem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I just took a chance to read any of your poems and it was my choice. I've gone for a right choice. This poem is too good to touch and penetrate a heart whom the expressions are meant. Last line is so nice.... I swear From the depths of my heart There shall not be another Another Majnu Like how thou art I enjoyed the poem. Gautam