Yours Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Yours

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Yours
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Under stress and strain
Faithless when the road darkens

Wander here and there
Stumble and fall
Fall and stumble but to nowhere

Question everything
Even beautiful thing
That comes my way from nowhere

Feel as if suspended in mid-air
With no landing in sight
Don't know going where

Know not what might happen next
Still going forward
Not known with trust or without trust

But I am sure every step
I take forward
Brings me nearer you

As I am always yours

Wednesday, September 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 September 2014

an attraction for the human or the divine nicely portrayed.

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Valsa George 25 September 2014

Great affirmation of a bond either with a loved one or with God himself..... Even though, the road ahead is darkened and you stumble on the way, you are sure each step you take brings you closer to her or Him! Great write which can be interpreted more than one way! Liked it Deepak! !

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