Zoo Break Poem by Denis Mair

Zoo Break

Rating: 4.5


Zoo Break


Richard Rorty left the back forty at the age of minus one-hundred-and-nine
Leave him alone to gnaw his bone, and he'll find home in his own sweet time
Philosophy has let us fall right back into the mire
Let's slog along and not get saved by rapture's white-hot fire
The slow way takes years of stumbling and pain
Till the eyes of our world can open again
That stately place in Xanadu should be an empty dome
Where any sound can echo, any thought can be at home
The grand vacuum takes all images, but not to hold them
The stillness parts for all sounds, then rushes to enfold them
Humankind once found there its highest dwelling place
A formless sanctum to provide the soul with its own space
The menagerie in the basement kept its carnage out of sight
Above, the incense-tendrilled air was pierced by beams of light
Who stirred that lower nest of hornets?
Who riled the barnyard hordes?
Who left the cellar door ajar?
Who drove the geese out of their gourds?
Now watch the clever monkeys vault along ballistic tracks
While catwalk lemmings let off steam by doing jumping jacks
Chimps with slingshots squint their eyes and let lead pellets fly
Equations spun in lofty realms condemn the other side to die
Hairy fists are set to work by grand imaginings
The highest leaps of thought reserved for harmful fissionings
While combines of inventiveness devour a world's trees
The keenest minds are pandering, so we will sink in ease
Whole lifetimes of expertise go into arbitrage
The world outside our window starts to look like a mirage
The seedbed that nurtured us does not engage our feelings
We care more for our leverage and for our business dealings

Are these the eyes that tried one day to see the whole world whole?
Is this the mind that made a higher consciousness its goal?
Reflection needs a sacred space, but that's now occupied
The quiet loft above the pews is now barnyardified
So get set now and pull up stakes, prepare to meet...your...'NEEDS'!
In the feather-flyingest, fur-spittingest, eye-gougingest,
gut-rowelling Granddaddy of all stampedes!

Tuesday, August 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: disasters
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 23 August 2016

An extraordinary commentary on the degradation now assailing our world. There seem to be no places left for dreams. The loft has also been taken over by those ancient cellar creatures. The psychopath rules Ok. What a marvellous poem, Denis.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 August 2016

Ah! Well! With that explanation, the poem now bloomed into a fully blown out flower. The tragic human decadence of our times is effectively captured in the poem. Let me lament with you: Are these the eyes that tried one day to see the whole world whole? Is this the mind that made a higher consciousness its goal? Very well done, Sir. Sorry for my lack of knowledge of history. (10)

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 18 August 2016

Denis, I don't claim I understood your poem. But, please tell me if Xanadu is the same place Carlos Castaneda (author of A Separate Reality and Journey To Ixtlan) frequented with his sorceror guru Don Juan. All said and done, your poem leaves a great impact on the psyche. That I believe is the mark of good poetry.

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Denis Mair 19 August 2016

Xanadu was historically the palace of Kubla Khan when he ruled over the combined Mongol and Chinese empires. It was romanticized as a dream palace in Samuel Taylor Coleridge's famous poem KUBLA KHAN.

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Susan Williams 09 August 2016

Zoo Break, a literary son of Animal House- Robinson Crusoe- Animal Farm- -Revelation- - Denis, you've made my thoughts go down, down, down into the sad place, the hopeless pit, the apocalypse of the human race realm of darkness. Once a writer sees this place, it is difficult to heal your broken wings and return to Xanadu which is no longer a destination to be desired since it has devolved from lack of dreams and visions and visitors into a mud-mired barn. This is a gripping, grieving, grey poem of masterpiece proportions. Stunning. A ten is so meager, almost an insult to this write.

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