Begins with a smile
Reincarnated to be a desire
Despite the cold often to charge
Hard-hearted still not budge
From desire become a feeling
Expectations, nuances, also charming
Together, blinded the soul
To differences that invisible
In the differences, doubt created
Make hearts stray to the fragility of believe
Only survive without able to against
Indeed slowly, but surely will gain
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Beautifuly Journey of feelings, but its Journey of life too. You have presented it very well. Loved reading it.
Feelings are important but so is reason, to much feeling can cause great divisions which can only be subsumed by temperance and reason. If it is a journey of life then there are many feelings that enriches us from what we learn. Great language rich in texture
Doubt is dangerous. I like to stand on firm ground. This poem does put me on guard.i like it. Look ahead. Mohabeer Beeharry
Life on earth is an unending journey of feelings and emotions, at times limiting us to daily existence. When writing poetry we expand our horizons to include a cacophony of awareness through our senses. Your poem inspired the above thought. Thank you for allowing me to read your poetry. Very good expression. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We are on a long journey, a great poem.