adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

Journey Of Feeling - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Begins with a smile
Reincarnated to be a desire
Despite the cold often to charge
Hard-hearted still not budge

From desire become a feeling
Expectations, nuances, also charming
Together, blinded the soul
To differences that invisible

In the differences, doubt created
Make hearts stray to the fragility of believe
Only survive without able to against
Indeed slowly, but surely will gain

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Comments about Journey Of Feeling by adheez van der beanthz

  • Gold Star - 8,827 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/19/2013 12:11:00 PM)

    Beautifuly Journey of feelings, but its Journey of life too. You have presented it very well. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,355 Points Kevin Patrick (8/19/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    Feelings are important but so is reason, to much feeling can cause great divisions which can only be subsumed by temperance and reason. If it is a journey of life then there are many feelings that enriches us from what we learn.

    Great language rich in texture (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohabeer Beeharry (8/18/2013 2:09:00 PM)

    Doubt is dangerous. I like to stand on firm ground.
    This poem does put me on guard.i like it.
    Look ahead.

    Mohabeer Beeharry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (8/17/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Very good expression I really enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,002 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/17/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    Life on earth is an unending journey of feelings and emotions, at times limiting us to daily existence. When writing poetry we expand our horizons to include a cacophony of awareness through our senses. Your poem inspired the above thought. Thank you for allowing me to read your poetry. Very good expression. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Karen Gonzalez-videla (8/16/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    beautifully written :) I really enjoyed reading it :) Keep up the good work!

    Karen... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/16/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    I see this journey long and has many rocks to stub a barefooted soul.
    But feeling comes in many forms like some feelings are protective like shoes.
    Other feelings are soothing like a salve you put on your feet. And still other feelings
    are green grass to those feet when the shoes come off and and cool air give the feet relief. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,781 Points Dave Walker (8/15/2013 3:20:00 AM)

    We are on a long journey, a great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 15, 2013


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