Kaishai Crescent


Kaishai Crescent Poems

1. A Shattered Life 2/14/2005
2. I Will Never Forget 2/14/2005
3. Seasons Can Be Painful 2/14/2005
4. Suicide Or No? 2/14/2005
5. Words Of Encouragement 2/14/2005
6. Prayers 2/14/2005

Comments about Kaishai Crescent

  • Poetry Hound (2/15/2005 2:02:00 AM)

    I admit that I have no idea why you post your journal entries on this site. And that's what your poems read like - very self-absorbed journal entries. And they look like they come from a mind that has had extremely limited exposure to great poetry. If you look around, you'll find that your poems are very similar to the poems submitted by many other adolescents on this site. Just about every day there's a poem contemplating suicide. It's so predictable. I suggest that you familiarize yourself with the well-established poets on poemhunter - the ones listed at the bottom of the home page. Read them and let them influence you. Then maybe you'll be on the road to writing some original poems.

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Best Poem of Kaishai Crescent

Prayers

Oh, my dear guardian angel,
Hold me close and tight,
Save me from the night,
Before I begin to fade away,
Never to see the next day.

Oh, my dear guardian angel,
Help me through this life,
Rid of all this strife,
Push away the dark,
Upon my life you leave a mark.

Oh, my dear guardian angel,
Guide and save me,
Help me be able to see,
My point and purpose here,
As my death draws near.

Oh, my dear guardian angel,
Bring me into your light,
Scare away my fright,
Protect me with love,
While everything flies ...

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