Kaishai Crescent

Kaishai Crescent Poems

1. A Shattered Life 2/14/2005
2. I Will Never Forget 2/14/2005
3. Seasons Can Be Painful 2/14/2005
4. Suicide Or No? 2/14/2005
5. Words Of Encouragement 2/14/2005
6. Prayers 2/14/2005

Comments about Kaishai Crescent

  • Poetry Hound (2/15/2005 2:02:00 AM)

    I admit that I have no idea why you post your journal entries on this site. And that's what your poems read like - very self-absorbed journal entries. And they look like they come from a mind that has had extremely limited exposure to great poetry. If you look around, you'll find that your poems are very similar to the poems submitted by many other adolescents on this site. Just about every day there's a poem contemplating suicide. It's so predictable. I suggest that you familiarize yourself with the well-established poets on poemhunter - the ones listed at the bottom of the home page. Read them and let them influence you. Then maybe you'll be on the road to writing some original poems.

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Best Poem of Kaishai Crescent

Words Of Encouragement

Take a deep breath, take another step forward,
Let yourself relax, get carried away in the wind.
Feel freedom surrounding you with open arms,
Taking you in, helping to greatly encourage.

Just need confidence, though it is hidden,
Deep down in the recesses of my lonely soul.
Have to keep moving on, taking more steps,
Striding onward with steps of great courage.

Just need to rid of the pain, rid of the sorrows,
Move on with life and follow our own paths.
All the way until the end of our own time,
Though there is no need to be discouraged.

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