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Staring At Death

I stand and stare into the distant light
In that life i could not fight it left me worse for wear
Still i stand and stare
In that life i had the ones i love but yet others wait up above
Still i stand and stare not going anywhere
I choose not to die tonight
I draw away from the distancing light till no longer it is in my sight
Pitch black all around me, now i stand and stare into nowhere
My soul being pulled back to life, i decided to return back to my beloved wife
I lie and stare at my wife in despair, upon her face a running tear
She thought she'd lost me If only...

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