रुबाई०७ Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

रुबाई०७

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तू आँखों को कहने दिया कर
जीभ को सोया रहने दिया कर।
तू अक़्लों के फाने लगाने छोड़
तू इस पानी को बहने दिया कर।

•फाना- अड़चन।

This is a translation of the poem ਰੂਬਾਈ੦੭ by Jagdish Singh Ramana
Monday, November 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: ethereal,language,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 06 December 2020

Superb! ! ! Kya kehne.... Bahut khoob.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 November 2020

Waaaahhhh sabaq aamiz rubaai. Dheron daad.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 04 December 2020

Thank very much Mam for these wonderful world of appreciation.

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Rajnish Manga 30 November 2020

Khubsurat Rubai. Abhivyakti ka andaaz kuchh bhi ho, kahna jaruri hai taaki dil par bojh na bana rahe. Thanks for sharing.

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Varsha M 30 November 2020

Umda panktiyan. Bahut khoob. Dhanyawad.

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