My dog running through the fields
her tongue hanging from gaping jaws
she slows to sniff a rabbit hole
nose close to the ground
spies a young rabbit
she bounds as it escapes
She whirls round
and spies another
but she hears my call
she races over
stopping just in time
She now lies sleeping
curled up in her bed
while she’s chasing rabbits
it’s all but in her head
It's an adorable piece of writing. Only makes me wish more I actually owned a dog.
Cute, cute, cute...Only one who has a dog is able to understand the feeling :)
I'm laughing when I reading this, why because your dog enjoying chasing that rabbit but in suddenly you call her, and stop it.... what a dog but I know she never get in her mind that rabbit....
: -) Love this - brought back memories - well captured imagery in a neat style.
This is like made of yeast. This dog is so adorable. Great poem indeed. Should you join any poet books?
This was such a sweet poem. I couldn't help but smile as I read it.
I like the poem. Dogs are best of friends with their owners, very loyal and faithful. If you spell its name backwards - it's god! . No wonder. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
My Black Lab is very fond on bunnies. He is very obedient, except when he sees a bunny. I'm sure he chases them in his sleep too. A beautiful poem and lovely remembrance for Fearn. Darla :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I think your dog must be very obedient. hhaaaa. Nicely written!