0012 Poetry Class Poem by Michael Shepherd

0012 Poetry Class

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Two o’clock on a quiet afternoon,
and the class file in for their poetry ‘hour’,
brief daily slot in the packed week’s course in many things.

We’ve been through ‘the basics’ –
whatever they are these days;
they’ve been told what, at least,
they used to be; I try to keep all options open,
say ‘this is what it used to be’, tell them
it’s a great time for poetry now, no rules,
just sincerity, the open heart, some models
if they need them, so after this week,
just read, write, as much as they can;
and now, forget about achievement,
just feel really good
that you’re doing what you want to do,
being what you want to be - yourself -
saying what you want to say –
feel more like a loving, expressive human being
than you’ve ever felt before..

A few more basics, just as few as may be useful;
then I say, here’s today’s offered theme, stay in the room,
or find a place outside on this fine day,
come back promptly please..

Forty brief minutes later, they return;
would anyone like to read theirs, no compulsion?
None of them want to be the first, in case…
I wonder if they know just how much they’re loved..
I ask one, in the end; then of course
they all want to read, each with
an apologetic preface first..

At the end of the week, the inevitable
request for a presentation; I’ve tried
to shield these innocents from that.
I say, it’s voluntary… they all want to read.

And so they do. We chose ‘Childhood’ as the theme
at 24 hours’ notice and just forty minutes..
perfect choice. The audience love them
for just being themselves, and what they have to say.

The one who pretends to be a mouse
reads hers; her cheeks are pink with mingled
modesty and sincerity. I catch
the light on the corner of my colleague’s eye
where a tear of sheer love is gathering.
Poetry has worked its magic once again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Shepherd 11 December 2006

Agreed! The ideal poetic development would be, start with originality, finish with originality perfectly expressed.. But there may come a point when they get into a repetitive rut, and need some outside leverage...we'll see.

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Danny Reynolds 11 December 2006

Genuinely nice to see the 'Glass half full' take on our hobby. A lot of how we portray, develop and transmit our internal doodles, may be down to our original inspiration, but we mustn't teach out the originality for the sake of anyone's rule book? Danny

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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 December 2006

it is lovely isnt it? poetry sincerity works magic

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