(006) Poetry Poem by premji premji

(006) Poetry

Rating: 2.9


Scratched on air,
Scribbled on water....
Trap me in
The prison of words...
And call me ''Poem''.....
I am that.......
Poetry.....

Spirit of the forest,
The wind and water,
Will I not be entrapped
When setting
A trap for you?

Message and reply, between two poets...
Premji and Angelina.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 17 June 2009

nice expressions ma'am...liked it very much....10 with love shan

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Indira Renganathan 17 June 2009

A smile at a smile....good10

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2009

Good poetic trap Premji...the frame is now full i presume! thanks...enjoyable read...10

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Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

Thanks for bringing me into your frame. Leena

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 June 2009

Lovely and interesting 10+++

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Sana Rose 27 July 2009

Really...a beautiful tricky write.....smiles n cheers 4 u! ! !

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 26 June 2009

Marvelous write. Premji........................

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very interesting poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mamta Agarwal 22 June 2009

very beautifulmost of the time I feel words intrude in moments of ecstasy. one just wants to be... Mamta

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Deepti Agarwal 21 June 2009

a sweet wonderful trap...... :)

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