(045) Sun, Moon & River Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(045) Sun, Moon & River

Rating: 3.0


Look at the moon
Shining so bright
Look at the sun
It’s such a sight
Look at the river
Flowing so fast
I wonder, how long
These three will last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mariyam Reyshma 04 December 2015

So deep...n nice :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 March 2007

The poem may be small but its Awfully good... just like writer thats understood... Risha...: -]

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Patricia Gale 01 January 2007

A simple piece to remind us of what nature is.... well done

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Leigh A. Hill 31 December 2006

simple. but pretty, and a tight ryhme. starr

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Onida 23 December 2006

nice one.very simple yet it has those things which r noticed very rarely. regards, nida

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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