Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(022) Waiting For The Baby - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

We are waiting for the baby
To smile its sweet smiles
We are waiting for the baby
To touch the nursery tiles
We are waiting for the baby
To say its first word
We are waiting for the baby
To taste its first curd
we are waiting for the baby
To eat its first snack
We are waiting for the baby
To give us all a smack!


Comments about (022) Waiting For The Baby by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • Lauren Degnan (11/9/2007 6:16:00 PM)

    You go girl.It's colorful in artistic ways. (Report)Reply

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (3/14/2007 5:26:00 AM)

    I have said it before but will say it again, india must be a magical place to be so gifted with such talented daughters... Risha (Report)Reply

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  • David Harris (2/19/2007 4:03:00 AM)

    Risha, so young, yet you write so beautifully and it is a pleasure to read, this is no exception. Just keep up the writing.
    David
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  • Aldo Kraas (2/1/2007 10:53:00 PM)

    This poem is wonderful (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (2/1/2007 6:55:00 PM)

    The poem sounds like a lullaby to a baby. Very nicely written. (Report)Reply

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  • Raghavan Warrier (1/28/2007 11:12:00 AM)

    In a very subtle way you have portrayed how a baby changes our lives and takes control of it. Excellent. (Report)Reply

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  • Duncan Wyllie (1/28/2007 4:46:00 AM)

    Very subtle and quite sweet, well done
    Love duncan X
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  • Diane Violet (1/26/2007 11:26:00 PM)

    Risha this is so cute and funny...............well done!
    Love and Hugs,
    Diane
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 5, 2011


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