Manonton Dalan

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051110h Crucial Moment - Poem by Manonton Dalan

it’s almost within my grasp
when she slip away from me
taken away by river current
i tried to catch her by diving
deep she was gone; where
with this turbulence; i swear

i came up and look around
saw something floating; i called
i managed to catch up; it was her
i gave my hand; she pulled hard
i thought i dislocated a shoulder
but i bear the pain just for her

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 11, 2010



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