Manonton Dalan

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051111h Nice Remembering - Poem by Manonton Dalan

chirping competing with rain
rattled chicks first downpour
soon they'll learn to just listen
hide beneath mom's wings
buffer for thunder's coming
enjoy heat, wait sun shining

ideas in their minds i overlook
they have it while living in nook
pre-neanderthal feathered legs
i should be learning from them
let leaves deflects those drips
my thoughts for today for keeps

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011


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