Manonton Dalan

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051111m Prevailing Mind - Poem by Manonton Dalan

limbs powerful yesterday
wilted to heat of summer
there was fear of losing
garbled voices heard
pains running through
thin blade scratching

composure changing
to doubtful resistance
health is a rock to see
mind start chopping
do's and don'ts litter
tense settle, maybe

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011


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