1 Out Of 3 Poem by David Darbyshire

1 Out Of 3

Rating: 4.3

I saw a Girl,
I've seen a woman,
I will see a lady
That makes three

The girl is one,
she's a lot of fun.
The woman is two,
watch out what ya do.

And the lady is three,
she is for me.
But thats Ok, one
out of 3.

***** ********* 28 August 2006

I think one in three would be more appropriate myself David, but you see her your way and write her as such. Beautifully simple and straight to your hearts point. Smiling at you, Tai

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Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2006

An interesting interpretation and a very individual style, clocked up a ten for the style Love duncan X

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Kelly marie Berry 05 September 2006

cool poem short and sweet i started to sing to it he he.keep it up love to hear more as you are very good

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Poetheart Morgan 06 February 2013

Very wise Poet! ! TFS

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Hehe, clever little ditty. Got my attention and held it for a bit.

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Andie D 29 November 2006

... thanks darling dave, this one made me smile! x

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Melvina Germain 11 November 2006

Really sweet and very creative David.--Melvina--

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Preeti - is here! 08 September 2006

hahahaha.....nice, little piece! Preets

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