Friday, October 19, 2007

(114) View Of The Sun Comments

Rating: 3.0

Greeted by the rooster's usual crow
I watched the fishermen at sea
As their little boats began to row
The people were in a hustle bustle
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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Tsira Goge 23 February 2008

Hello Risha...Beautiful poems, you are the clear head the small poetess... All you notice round yourself, even small poor the boy and so on...... I am glad that we have met... Thanks for warm for all comments....

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Vijay Gupta 15 February 2008

fine poem.i like it...............

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Diane Violet 02 November 2007

A day in the life of the view from Risha's sun, lovely poem! ! Hugs, Diane

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Patti Masterman 30 October 2007

Does Risha mean: Sweet little girl yielding a LARGE PEN? I love your moon poem, Risha. It seems like a classic already.

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Charles Garcia 30 October 2007

As Rajaram says the words flow like a river, beautiful write

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 October 2007

The picture is running like a cinema and the words flow like a river. A fine piece of work by Risha, the sweet little girl.

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rajagopal haran 29 October 2007

Dear Risha, really brilliant work; keep it up

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David Harris 19 October 2007

Risha, this was an unusal poem to say the least. However your imagination really soared on this one. I like it. Top marks my little princess of poetry. David

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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