(142) Five Elements Poem by premji premji

(142) Five Elements

Rating: 2.7


Dream starts...

Troubled sea....night
Twister arises with intense power...
We are struggling in the mid-seas...
In a ship without anchor...
Soon deep buried in a whirlpool.....

Dream continues....

Naked like careless children,
We walk through hoarfrost....
Trapped in an avalanche...
We dissolve...

Dream continues....

We look into the fuming mouth of
A huge volcano...
Like moths, we vanish....
We burn.....we diffuse....

Dream continues....

We travel like two ants...
Flying up on a huge kite,
Without any control.....
We sit in the vortex of a twister.....
The earth is vanished from vision....

Tell me,
Who are you?
Fire? Air? or Water?

The sand underneath your footstep....

Dream finishes.......

Friday, June 26, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: volcano,dream,elements,trapped
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema(Aanamika) 80 08 July 2009

Excellent poem, loved it...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Excellent poem, excellent idea.

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Micron 26 June 2009

we are all under the influence of the elements - but often forget this - great poem loved it hugs micron

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rago rago 26 June 2009

let the five elements rule us......... rather than asking questions? ....... well penned...

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