(018) Love And Life Poem by premji premji

(018) Love And Life

Rating: 3.0


Dear,

When I could listen to
Your heart-beats on mine,
Call it love!

When we could listen to
Our heart-beats in unison,
Call it life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 04 October 2008

just 4 lines of brief encounter with love--says it all nice poem premji ++++10 regards anjalie (notice the e)

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2016

I agree...................................

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Pandian Angelina 13 May 2009

Two minds Two hearts Two souls Two people so apart Made one By God and we call Him - Love! Prem, the Basic and Essential definition of love and live wonderfully rendered in verse. Yes, we live b'cos someone else's heart beats for us and our heart beats in love for them! So true, but, unfortunately, lucky few! Angel

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Sandhya S N 25 June 2009

Dear U r great! :) regards Sandhya

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Malini Kadir 15 July 2009

real great job so aptly and concisely put! !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2019

When I could listen to Your heart-beats on mine, Call it love! LOVE NO> > > > > > > > > > THE BEGINNING When we could listen to Our heart-beats in unison, Call it life! > > > > NO ....HUSBAND AND WIFE

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Mamta Agarwal 30 December 2009

love makes life worth it.read it again, a very intense, though simple poem. Mamta

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Yelena M. 28 December 2009

Simple and beautiful, it strikes to the core...Two as one in life, great message. Thanks, premji, and best wishes to you. (amar)

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Dear, When I could listen to Your heart-beats on mine' Rachel Ann Butler

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 August 2009

Sir this is a fine poem!

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