144 Proof Right Part 2 Poem by JOE POEWHIT

144 Proof Right Part 2

Rating: 5.0


The door closes on mayhem.
HAY! ! ! back again. [same].
Talking to the bum outside, with
the sign REPENT SINNERS.
Yea, : Golden Calf Oscar time', he said.
Idol worshippers, star desciples.
[well them crazies] Good wine.
Aids all over Africa, like Noah's flood.
[another] thirsty, long day. Plastic money,
Poor spending plastic money.
Poor walking around, mothers need milk money.
[just make more] NOT RIGHT, something wrong.
Bum said BABYLON THE GREAT, H-wood,
riding on the gamers industry. [milk the poor,
nothing changes]. One more, got to find work.
Layed off like the rest, Banker- Limo said,
mortgage overdue. **Tent city hear I come**.
Hears the plastic card monry for the bill.
hope it pays, [ increse limit thats all.]
Next time, [ FOLLOW LINE TO DOOR ].
REPENT SINNERS, bums still here.

2/25/2010 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 01 March 2010

Well done Joe, this reminds me an old song of Rustom Fella Cutty 'Money good Oh! MONEY GOOD'.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 28 February 2010

nice write... i liked it... maybe i'll rate it 10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 February 2010

Humane blend and touch of love Ooohing Thanks Sir…why it doesn’t stir slothful idiot politicians / civil society persons 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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