144 Proof Right Part 2 Poem by JOE POEWHIT

144 Proof Right Part 2

Rating: 5.0


The door closes on mayhem.
HAY! ! ! back again. [same].
Talking to the bum outside, with
the sign REPENT SINNERS.
Yea, : Golden Calf Oscar time', he said.
Idol worshippers, star desciples.
[well them crazies] Good wine.
Aids all over Africa, like Noah's flood.
[another] thirsty, long day. Plastic money,
Poor spending plastic money.
Poor walking around, mothers need milk money.
[just make more] NOT RIGHT, something wrong.
Bum said BABYLON THE GREAT, H-wood,
riding on the gamers industry. [milk the poor,
nothing changes]. One more, got to find work.
Layed off like the rest, Banker- Limo said,
mortgage overdue. **Tent city hear I come**.
Hears the plastic card monry for the bill.
hope it pays, [ increse limit thats all.]
Next time, [ FOLLOW LINE TO DOOR ].
REPENT SINNERS, bums still here.

2/25/2010 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

Thursday, February 25, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: flood,africa,money,mothers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 01 March 2010

Well done Joe, this reminds me an old song of Rustom Fella Cutty 'Money good Oh! MONEY GOOD'.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 28 February 2010

nice write... i liked it... maybe i'll rate it 10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 February 2010

Humane blend and touch of love Ooohing Thanks Sir…why it doesn’t stir slothful idiot politicians / civil society persons 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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