18 (A Final Tribute) Poem by Christopher's Dead

18 (A Final Tribute)



When you cried, I was there to lift you up
Make you whole again
You always said I helped mend your broken heart
But you always said I would never lose your hand
Now I know that what we were was so pathetic
Just contemplating
Indescribable synthetic makeup of a heart
Crisscrossing over, underneath our veins connected

But everything is wrong now, everything was right
Who’s to say our masochistic way of thinking
Was nothing but a lie?

Gave in to romance
A novel with our faces on the cover
Never read the ending
Wish I had then maybe I’d be sober
Instead I’m so deadly hung-over
A grave, unsteady pile of stones
Ready to tumble and crush you in your sleep
This is my final tribute to you

Eighteen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Of The Rose 09 December 2009

'Gave in to romance, A novel with our faces on the cover, Never read the ending' I love that line. This is really good i like the way you express yourself. It has a really good flow to it

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wow this is really good i like the view you took on it and the way you expressed yoursself

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Lexi Zamora 22 December 2010

Chris please tell me what's going on? ? ? ..If someone knows the truth about his suicide please tell me! ! !

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Iron Panda 23™ 01 March 2010

deepnesss.....i <3 it! !

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Tessa Rena 08 February 2010

this poem is really deep and i really like it

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Tricia Dildine 26 December 2009

WOW! i was looking for a poem that contributed to my relationship with my boyfriend, and i found it. this poem kicks a**! i lov eit to death: >

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Ronn Michael Salinas 24 December 2009

I see it as murderous. Cool poem, Christopher.

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