.2. As A Rule Poem by David Threadgold

.2. As A Rule

Rating: 5.0


Should there be a rule
To decide by the few
How man should survive
And what job he should do

Or could it be left
To happen at will
And muddle along
While standing quite still


© 2008 David Threadgold
Rambling Riddles & Rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 27 October 2008

And I think it happens quite frequently too! Good one - A '10! ' from me, Dave! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Chitra - 21 October 2008

fine lines... depicting a sense of individuality

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Tim Woodhouse 17 October 2008

Quirky and humorous! I like the idea of ' muddling through' - it's got me this far! I'll read more of these in time. Thanks, Tim

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Bethany Buhl 06 September 2008

And who should decide who survives and what they should do?

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