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*****2 Haiku (Fog & School)

Rating: 2.8
over the hill
a river of fog
flooding the valley

geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V

both of these appeared in the September 2009 Kukai Results
Susan Jarvis 05 December 2009
So few syllables, such tremendous images. S :)
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Robert Howard 08 October 2009
I love the form of the two poems. The geese seem to come from a distance, loom large overhead and move on to the opposite horizon. So much said with so few words!
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Meggie Gultiano 08 October 2009
geese flying south over the school bus a perfect V ...................... beautiful..! ! ! I can imagine this..looking up the sky. A perfect view..
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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009
Just lovely Ben....In three lines you manage to say so much -
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