Ben Gieske


*****2 Haiku (Fog & School) - Poem by Ben Gieske

over the hill
a river of fog
flooding the valley

geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V

both of these appeared in the September 2009 Kukai Results


Comments about *****2 Haiku (Fog & School) by Ben Gieske

  • Susan Jarvis (12/5/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    So few syllables, such tremendous images. S :) (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    I love the form of the two poems. The geese seem to come from a distance, loom large overhead and move on to the opposite horizon. So much said with so few words! (Report)Reply

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  • Meggie Gultiano (10/8/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    geese flying south
    over the school bus
    a perfect V
    ......................
    beautiful..! ! ! I can imagine this..looking up the sky. A perfect view..
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  • Sandra Martyres (10/2/2009 10:38:00 PM)

    Just lovely Ben....In three lines you manage to say so much - (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 2, 2009



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