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*****2 Haiku (Fog & School) - Poem by Ben Gieske
over the hill
a river of fog
flooding the valley
geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V
both of these appeared in the September 2009 Kukai Results
Poems by Ben Gieske : 18 / 288
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 2, 2009
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So few syllables, such tremendous images. S :) (Report)Reply
I love the form of the two poems. The geese seem to come from a distance, loom large overhead and move on to the opposite horizon. So much said with so few words! (Report)Reply
geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V
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beautiful..! ! ! I can imagine this..looking up the sky. A perfect view.. (Report)Reply
Just lovely Ben....In three lines you manage to say so much - (Report)Reply