*****2 Haiku (Fog & School)
Rating: ★2.8
over the hill
a river of fog
flooding the valley
geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V
both of these appeared in the September 2009 Kukai Results
a river of fog
flooding the valley
geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V
both of these appeared in the September 2009 Kukai Results
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Susan Jarvis
05 December 2009
So few syllables, such tremendous images. S :)
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Robert Howard
08 October 2009
I love the form of the two poems. The geese seem to come from a distance, loom large overhead and move on to the opposite horizon. So much said with so few words!
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Meggie Gultiano
08 October 2009
geese flying south
over the school bus
a perfect V
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beautiful..! ! ! I can imagine this..looking up the sky. A perfect view..
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Sandra Martyres
02 October 2009
Just lovely Ben....In three lines you manage to say so much -
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