the little gray mouse
edges toward the cheese
placed 5th in the December 2007 Shiki Monthly Kukai (free format)
MOUSEY PUT YOUR CRASH HELMET ON FIRST LOL!
Love duncan X
This is as good a 'ku as i've seen on here. What else is there in the mouse's world, but that cheese?
Watch out for the- (SMACK!) ...
a good haiku...poet is not self -absorbed and discrete from the object, a real haiku...
A delicate poem in exquisite taste... love, Allie xxxx
ALL THE TIME TRYING TO AVOID THE CAT... CUTE POEM!
This reflects the natural phenomenon of life. Nice.
In wintry night
cat catch the crying mice
is it tears or dew...............
Ben,5th place? -your haiku should have been in first place! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a ten from me...
wow a lovely haiku mouse edging to cheese
(read mine too haikus of love)
nice one..a 'koo'ing image on the moon and the cloudy spread...10
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