2.02 - I Saw Only Her Poem by Irresistible Erato myMuse

2.02 - I Saw Only Her

Rating: 4.5


‘Though the room was full, I saw only her
all the others gathered were just a blur.
My Muse of love poetry was standing there
looking beautiful beyond compare.

She was making the coffee and the tea
and poured out a 'pint of Guinness' for me.
Then as I supped it, I drank in the sight
of my lovely Muse upon that Guild night.

Like Mona Lisa stood my Muse so fair
silhouetted within the doorway there,
Mesmerised, I began to appreciate
her loveliness for she was looking great.

Beauty of character enshrined in grace.
Two sparkling eyes set in a lovely face.
Enthralled by the beauty of what I saw.
The contours of her body filled me with awe.

Friday, September 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,body,muse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 05 December 2016

Lovely poem, Irresistible. Congrats on having it selected as member poem of the day!

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Gajanan Mishra 19 September 2014

beauty of character and grace, good one.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 December 2016

silhouetted within the doorway there, Mesmerized, I began to appreciate her loveliness for she was looking great. A very nice poem shared.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2016

Like Mona Lisa! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 December 2016

Beauty of character enshrined in grace. Two sparkling eyes set in a lovely face. Lovely poem..... Congrats on being chosen.....

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Rajnish Manga 05 December 2016

A beautiful poem written in praise of a lovely muse having a perfect beauty of character and physical appearance, Wonderful portrayal. Thanks & Congrats. My Muse....looking beautiful beyond compare. Beauty of character enshrined in grace. The contours of her body filled me with awe.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 December 2016

Its amazing how irresistible manly senses get aroused with mere sight of the brightness of eyes and contours of a feminine physique, what ever the character it could be behind. Wonderful write arousing interest to enjoy. Thanks for sharing and congrats for being the member's PoD.

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Clarence Prince 05 December 2016

As she was more like Mono Lisa, Though the room was full, who else you would've seen? Thanks for sharing!

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Seamus O Brian 05 December 2016

How the beauty of a woman still stirs the hearts of men over countless millennia to take up their pen and pour out their hearts. A fine tribute to beauty, good sir.

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Pamela Sinicrope 05 December 2016

You've written of your muse...the perfect woman created perfectly for this poet...Guiness and all. I enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on poem of the day....

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