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Rating: 3.3

Images of you
reel in my sleep
and re-runs turn
in my half awakened state
then a full epic motion picture
plays thru-out the day
where you are the star.

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Tiffanie Lau 17 November 2007

i feel it. in the title and the stanza. nice!

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Chris Mendros 16 February 2007

Wow, that says a lot. I can see what you're saying completely. In fact, i've felt that very sentiment. Wish i'd come up with something like this. Excellent!

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