2nd February Poem by Zibele Mrasi

2nd February

Rating: 4.5


Like air next to the water fall
Like a blue sky and a moon at day light
Like the sun shadow the moon at night
Like a rain from heaven I have fall

Mountains have moved
Lions have feared
Kings kneeled
Time stopped

As I listen
You talk to my vain
In it heart blood has run
Love has impossible to happen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Young Church Poetry 02 February 2012

Falling in love is an amazing thing, well done.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 19 February 2012

A dozen lines written on the sky, falling amazingly on my eyes. Good poetry man,

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 February 2012

Wow man! superb poem my friend, the love bug has strike you.

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John Carse 04 February 2012

Thank you for your kind remarks and for reading my poems. I really like this one of yours - you have captured a moment in words and that's what poetry is all about. Regards

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Ebi Robert 03 February 2012

The genesis of the poem drew my suspense but the end is amazing. Quit suprising. Great.

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Gift Macozoma 03 February 2012

Beautiful nana.. One bit of human nature that cannot alter o evolve..that's love

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