As It Rain Poem by Zibele Mrasi

As It Rain



As it rain I listen to the melody
From the roof through a hole
It falls inside into the empty bucket
It falls in timed drops
Doo doo dodo doo dodo

As it rain I listen to the melody
From the roof through a hole
It fall inside the half full water bucket
Un sized measured sound drops
Tsi tsi tsi tsi tsi tsi tsi tsi

As it rain I listen to the melody
From the roof there it fall
It falls in this silent night
To quiet my soul with its silent drops
Waaaa whoa waaaaa whoa waaa

As it rain I listen to the lullaby
From this melody asleep I fall
This melody will be forever in my thought
Then I slowly closing my eyes
Zzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzz Zzzzzzzzz

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 06 February 2012

Hahahaha..i like how you end in each stanza with sounds especially the last one hahaha, it is a nice poem and yes rain always inspired many in each dropp of water and the melody..could be one of the best lullaby sang by nature..it's a nice poem my friend, keep it up n write more_Unwritten Soul

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Ula Goss 10 March 2012

The rythm is amazing!

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Niki Nicholas Nkuna 13 February 2012

you are on the creative road, keep it up!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 February 2012

One of the best poems i've ever read...well potrayed and that sound still echoes in my ears...asiliphakamise iflag yihlo.

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Subodh Pandey 07 February 2012

a nice write and beautifully portrayed.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 07 February 2012

i like when it`s raining.... your poems are quite interesting for me. they have a special melody... and it sounds greatly in my opinion. well, if you know some musicians you can create useful and true songs.and i`ll listen to them with pleasure. so, keep it up, you are a true talent

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