3- Oh Little Bird! Poem by sarwar chowdhury
3- Oh Little Bird!
Oh little bird
My sweet bird!
How can I say
My pain so hard!
Calling thy
Seeking thy
All around all the time,
Feeling empty
Feeling guilty
No rythm no ryhm.
Why thy
Far away
Tell me bird tell!
Nothing need
Only thy
My dear angel.
I let thee
Fly free
As thou wish all over,
Does not mean
Letting me
Thy escape so far!
Am stung
By thou love
No drug can cure
It's thy
Only can
Give me life so pure!
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S-imple poems you wrote a-re quite clear and true. r-are poet can compose w-itty description of feelings, a-s you do it with simplicity r-hythm and rhyme a beauty!
indeed a well written rythmic poem which longingly immortalizes the pain of the lover whose let the beloved go free only to be stricken by the careless abandonment of the latter....love is cruel and love is hard indeed.well done chowdhury saab!
I love this one its one of my faves
sometimes the old world style renders strength to a poem...
‘…Give me life so pure! ’ Rightly said bird’s song a sure sanitizer of our soul… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page and grace by your comment …please niv
i LOVE it. it is really wonderful by the imagery, poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant, and welled penned i give it a 10++++++++++++
My pain so hard! ........ it is really wonderful by the imagery; yet poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant...........well penned.10+, thanks fopr sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 3:15:29 PM # 1.0.0
Neatly made..full of innocence! ! ! Definitely a 10! ! !