I am a passer-by here on the way to eternity
and she too.
O Angel-like woman
Come near, wait for a while
Let me see your to praise for
she is touched by heart-felt words of mine
but she did not know-
those words came out
because I were touched by her floral mind!
I am missing you
and my heart cry looking at far
Be blessed o dear wherever you are!
One sight I see with two eyes
Everyday the sun has a rise.
Beloved offered a dream
that was sweeter than all sweet
I can not explain the gleam
came across, fearing if she quit.
Thirsty classic soil
every inch thirsty
Kisses are travelling
and she bestows
and he bestows
Passion has stopped the time
The mingled love uncovered them
suppressed feeling of agony has gone
Flesh and spirit make a math-
one plus one equal to one (1+1=1) .
They have been meaning each other.
Yes, I am a perfect stranger
I am alone, I am a passer-by
Believe me, I don’t know who am I.
Trust not the lust-driven lover, never
A true lover can not be cruel ever.
How much pain infused in my heart you don't know!
Yet I am living with your feeling wherever you go!
Why are you looking at that bright star, dear!
That is twinkling
That is giggling
That is crying
That has magnetism
That has tremendous radiance.
Have you obsessed!
Be quite please be quite!
Bcause that can not be touched
Because that can not be owned.
Because that can be loved only from far away!
Just be choked with tears when it would be out of sight for ever!
©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.
The steam of love...perfect! ! .................good work............all d best.........
It has been instilled into my mind with a title 'True Love or the cruel lover'. Absolutely correct but had it been otherwise i could not have read an excellent verse from you.
Excellent love poem, written with a lot of feel.Very enjoyable read!
Wow! ! ! liked most the below two lines... (How much pain infused in my heart you don't know! Yet I am living with your feeling wherever you go!)
‘…Kisses are traveling // and she bestows // and he bestows // Passion has stopped the time…’ Excellent sojourner dear my Poet…brilliance galore.. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts: RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS niv
'...Thirsty classic soil every inch thirsty...' Why for? Written in 'white-ink'. Namaste-ji and Namaskar. Ten dr. sakti
very nice! I love your unique style and the important meaning behind your words. If you have time could you take a look at some of mine. Best!
beautiful piece....titled beautifully...interesting every verses hides pain and longing of love very creative in style..... very unique....10+++++
WOW... IN THE TOP 500... IT S WRITTEN WITH A DIFFERING STYLE THT ONE DOESNT SEE TODAY... GREAT EFFORT AT UNTITLED LOVE VERSES... :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
well written. i am not that good to judge poems as i am still a kid, but i sure can say that this poem was a beautiful one. and i can see that it is one among the top 500 poems. congrats.