Royal bengal tiger!
When swim to pass across river
Target is determined.
Just straight forward move on
To reach that place has set out.
Ever if waves move little
Back to the beginning point.
Straight a must
No left no right
Upright - just.
Royal bengal do not know,
jostle and joggle
Eyes are radiant with glory
Richer colour for
Created ancient myth and folklore
Royal bengal tiger never agree with
Mischievous counsel of jackals.
(The national animal of Bangladesh is Royal Bengal Tiger)
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focus, the aim is all.. well written and not long jus the right length. =)
A wonderful poem. Great from start to finish!
The picture your poem brings to my head is truly one that is magnificent! Lovely....
A wonderfully descriptive piece and informative too, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
Very good poem annd well written
nice it is majestic creatures
Impressive Description of a Brave Tiger
I think this poem is outstanding! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
An awesome poem....the last two punch lines are really meaningful. Well done Mr. Chowdhury! By the way my family name is Chowdhry as well. Nasir is my pen-name.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
a brilliant write indeed....after reading several times i came to know this that you wrote this master piece with so much love, passion and patriotism towards a symbol, animal and country...even thou it gives me the idea of the poem once i read written by Alama Iqbal our national poet on a falcon 'Shaheen'- in this poem i think you are trying to show the true patriotism and making right decissions no matter how tough time would be and always achieve the target no matter hard the prey is....i might be wrong but if im not then i think its the one of the best and inspiring write you did sir....thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A+++++ rgds asif